i scramble again
craning
balancing the chair on one leg
holding my breath
counting to five
you turn around
almost for a second
eyes grazing around
i catch my moment
of truce
and untold salvation
later
another instance
my senses lapsing again
closeness
friction
and intoxication
laughter smoldering
something within melts
and opens up
effortlessly
completely
secrets lying bare
dancing even, maybe
right in front of your eyes
reasons take excuses
mistakes, dark corners
surrendering predominantly
body, mind, soul...
moist eyes
heart stripped
naked
and clothed again
- assurance
entwined
caressing your forearm
murmur escapes your lips
a name
a subtle whisper
the same
yet again
tiny jostle
within
about
audible crash
where did i err?
walking in late, perhaps.
surely deserves more?
my complete submission
the remnants of your love.
7 comments:
glad i m the 1st at least this time.... :) lovely breath taking poem... reminds me of the olden days when i fell in love wih you for each and every word you wrote... hufff!!!!
Nice!!!!
Words that say it all!!! amazing it is when they take the best positions in your poems :) wonderful, really! :)
"heart stripped, naked, and clothed again- assurance" just brilliant!!!
keep writing my friend, you are too good at this! :) <3
Every word evoked an image close to my heart. I know how it feels.I mean it. you can't insanely give exact words to what i feel like this. I hate you.
semma ! good one :)just keep it going siva... expecting more. * hugs *
loved it....very much!
Ecellent! outta da world!!
I strongly believed that these feelings can neva b expressed thru words! Ashamed of ma ignorance nw...
It says it ALL, perfectly!
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